Help from native speakers of English wanted

...spread vicious rumors that will chase their customers away!

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Great, that works! Thanks again for your help!

I was wondering if you could give me your opinion on the captions of these screenshots:

"...watch your cash flow to keep it from going down the drain"? just clever

"What's it worth to a customer to use these luxury..."

"Your saboteur is on the loose. What will the authorities do when they inspect this place?"

Good suggestions, thank you! I wonder if "on the loose" could be turned into a pun of its own? After all, "loo" means "restroom" in the UK...

I also like the idea about "...watch your cash flow to keep it from going down the drain", but this sentence is a little short by itself. I mean, I am looking for a few words to say before the "...", but I found nothing yet...